Grayson Perry as "Claire" |
Greek vase - 800 - 650 BC |
Grayson Perry produces pots which depict scenes from modern life, just as the Greeks produced vases/urns showing everyday scenes and themes from mythology. Ted Turnbull has produced a pastiche - a copy with an amusing intent - of Keats' poem "Ode to a Grecian Urn", updating it for a modern reader. Turnbull keeps to the same structure as Keats - five stanzas of ten lines with a rhyming scheme ABABCDE(DCE). The triplet may vary between DCE/CED. Turnbull also keeps to the same ordering of his argument as Keats over the five stanzas. For a modern poem, not only is the form deliberately traditional, but the use of poetic techniques - alliteration, enjambment, caesura - are as much features of Turnbull's poem as of Keats'.
It is difficult to gauge the tone and attitude with which Turnbull approaches his subject. Initially, he seems sarcastic, even rude, about the pot, the artist and the subject matter of the decoration. The pot is a "kitschy" vase - a derogatory term for something clever and popular but lacking artistic merit - and Perry himself, with a reference to his cross-dressing, is sneeringly described as a "Shirley Temple manque" or wannabe. The term "knocked out" suggests that these pots are made quickly and carelessly, whereas a Grayson Perry vase can sell for more than £100,000. An explanation for this could be that the Greek vases that we see now as objects of artistic beauty were, in fact, everyday, utilitarian objects used in the kitchen to carry liquids. They were not intended to be seen primarily as works of art, although great care was taken to decorate them. Maybe Turnbull is commenting on how our perceptions of what is beautiful changes with time. He is being ironic in referring to Grayson Perry's pots as similarly ordinary pieces, because they are created as original works of art. This is an example of "Art imitating Life."
In stanza one, the subjects of the decoration - modern "youf" - are similarly negatively described as "louts" and firmly placed by the lexis and reference to the Daily Express in a particular socio-economic bracket . However, in stanza two, there is an increasingly lyrical tone to the writing, as if the poet is recognising the power of the "pot" to evoke a particular moment in place and time. He conjures up the sound of the "motors", ("throaty roar", "joyful throb") and the cries of their girl passengers. The use of the word "children" suggests a more benign attitude to these young people, previously described as "louts" and "kids", although the description of their sexual exploits is graphic and uncompromising. There is a ruefulness in his foretelling of the possible outcome of their behaviour - contracting an STD - as he, of course, can see into the future, as these young people, frozen in time, cannot. This mirrors Keats' rueful realisation that the men and women on his urn, "forever panting and forever young" will never know the pains of love as he has known.
The fifth stanza appears to return to a harsher tone, but there is a suggestion that at least the activities of these boys is life-affirming, in contrast to the "bleached tarmac of dead suburban streets" and the onlookers behind the curtains, too old or too cynical to take part themselves or appreciate the thrill. There is also sympathy in the acknowledgement that quiet streets are for those that can afford them.
In the last stanza, Turnbull, like Keats, addresses the "crock" - an apparent return to the sarcasm of the first stanza. However, this could be an ironic acknowledgement of the original purposes of the Greek vases/urns which were to carry liquids. Although carefully decorated, they were not created as works of art but as everyday objects to be used in the kitchen. Turnbull is reflecting how our perception of an object's beauty is affected by the passage of time - the mundane becomes the extraordinary with time and distance. There is humour in the euphemism of "we're long in the box" as he acknowledges that whereas these images are fixed for all time, we are doomed to mortality. Unlike Keats' Ode, however, Turnbull's Ode ends on a question - although the question mark is missing. He wonders how people in the future will look back on these images immortalised on the pot. Will they look back with nostalgia, seeing this time as one of freedom and joy, where things are not so black and white, as in Keats’ time, which spoke of absolutes like “truth” and “beauty”? Will they think it a happier time when truth was not so easy to define and beauty was in the eye of the beholder?
The poet seems to end ambiguously, whereas Keats’ makes a clear statement (if you accept the usual interpretation and do not dismiss it as meaningless). The apparently judgemental attitude to the young people depicted on the one hand suggests that their lifestyle lacks meaning, and hence worth, and that a return to absolutes is preferable. On the other, there are moments of sympathy and even tenderness, which suggests that all lives are to be celebrated and that everything is relative. Similarly, the terms with which the pot is addressed (“kitschy”, “crock”) suggests that it has no intrinsic value – indeed, that it has less than Keats’ urn as it was not made for a purpose – and yet the poet knows how “valuable” the “crock” really is in this modern world – again, suggesting relativity and that ”worth”, not just beauty, lies in the eye of the beholder. The poet may also be commenting on the media’s attitude to the depiction of men and women today.
It is also a comment, of course, on his own poem, as he has taken an iconic poem and made a pastiche – a humorous adaptation – rather like Grayson Perry has hijacked the Greek vase for his own subversive purposes, reinterpreting it for a modern audience.
A flowery tale more sweetly than our rhyme:
Of deities or mortals, or of both,
What men or gods are these? What maidens loth?
What
mad pursuit? What struggle to escape?
Heard
melodies are sweet, but those unheard
Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on;
Not
to the sensual ear, but, more endear'd,
Pipe to the spirit ditties of no tone:
Fair
youth, beneath the trees, thou canst not leave
Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare;
Bold
Lover, never, never canst thou kiss,
Though
winning near the goal yet, do not grieve;
She cannot fade, though thou hast not thy bliss,
Ah,
happy, happy boughs! that cannot shed
Your
leaves, nor ever bid the Spring adieu;
And,
happy melodist, unwearied,
For
ever piping songs for ever new;
More
happy love! more happy, happy love!
For
ever warm and still to be enjoy'd,
All
breathing human passion far above,
That
leaves a heart high-sorrowful and cloy'd,
To
what green altar, O mysterious priest,
Lead'st
thou that heifer lowing at the skies,
What
little town by river or sea shore,
Or
mountain-built with peaceful citadel,
And,
little town, thy streets for evermore
Will
silent be; and not a soul to tell
With
forest branches and the trodden weed;
Thou shalt remain, in
midst of other woe
[LC1]An
“Ode” is a lyrical verse with its origins in Ancient Greece, where it was set
to music. Keat’s wrote five major odes.
They are usually in praise of an individual or thing and then expand to reflect
on a major theme – here, the nature of truth and beauty. An “urn” is a vessel (like a vase) for
carrying liquids. Nowadays most likely
to be used for carrying funereal ashes.
See the picture on the blogsite for a typical Grecian urn.
[LC2]You
– the whole poem is addressed to the Urn.
It is best to imagine you, the reader, watching and listening to Keat’s
as he examines the urn and muses on what meaning it holds for us.
[LC3]Virgin
– the urn, although dating back thousands of years, remains unbroken.
[LC4]Wedded
to stillness
[LC5]The
urn is just sitting there, unused and ancient but….
[LC6]Sylvan
= woodland, pastoral. It can tell the
history of an earlier (more innocent?) time - even better than the poet can.
[LC7]He
is beginning to comment on the decoration on the urn. “Legend” means story.
[LC8]places in classical Greece
[LC9]He
asks a series of rhetorical questions about the decoration on the urn. Who are these men and gods with which it is
decorated and what are they doing?
[LC10]He
is reflecting on how all the people in the decoration are frozen in time – the
notes of the panpipes can’t be heard, the lover cannot kiss his beloved – but
she can also not grow old.
[LC11]He
is claiming that the stopping of time is a happy circumstance as trees are
always green, singers sing forever, love remains fresh and full of promise and
people remain young.
[LC12]This
timeless love is better than the mortal experience of love which ends in
sadness, is spoiled and makes the lover feel sick.
[LC13]He
is looking at more of the decoration – possibly turning it round or walking
round it – and sees a scene of a priest sacrificing a cow on an altar.
[LC14]Drest
= archaic spelling of “dressed” – the cow is decorated with flowers
[LC15]He
is imagining the people coming out of the town and following the procession
[LC16]The
streets are emptied of people and no-one can come back to explain why
[LC17]Attic
= ancient Greek (note the assonance with “attitude” meaning appearance) He is
speaking to the urn.
[LC18]Embroidered
(braided)
[LC19]Highly
decorated
[LC20]The
urn
[LC21]He
is telling (the urn) what he is doing in the poem – being led to reflect on the
nature of our life by looking at the vase
[LC22]Ideas
of death
[LC23]“Cold”
because it is not alive – in contrast to us and in spite of the lifelike
drawings on it. Pastoral means
countryside. The decoration is
“pastoral” and this has been used to stand in for the urn itself – this is a
rhetorical device called “metonomy”
[LC24]When
his generation dies
[LC25]It
will still be here when later generations go through bad times, as a companion
with a message to them
[LC26]The
urn is “replying” to Keats’ musings on mortality. It is a quote within a quote – the “Beauty is
truth, truth beauty” was written by a famous artist, Sir Joshua Reynolds,
affirming the that the meaning of our lives can be seen in beautiful things –
art, poetry, music. So the urn is repeating this (speaking of itself, as it
were, as a beautiful object) and then saying that beauty and truth are all we
have and all we need to understand our lives.
There is considerable amount of debate about what these
lines actually mean – from that given above to being absolutely
meaningless.
Hello!
What's all this here[LC1] ? A kitschy[LC2] vase
some Shirley Temple manqué [LC3] has knocked out[LC4]
delineating tales [LC5] of kids in cars
on crap estates[LC6] , the Burberry clad louts[LC7]
who flail[LC8] their motors through the smoky night
from Manchester to Motherwell or Slough[LC9] ,
creating bedlam on the Queen's highway[LC10] .[LC11]
Your gaudy evocation[LC12] can, somehow,
conjure the scene without inducing fright[LC13] ,
as would a Daily Express [LC14] exposé,
can bring to mind the throaty turbo roar[LC15]
of hatchbacks tuned almost to breaking point,
the joyful throb of UK garage or
of house [LC16] imported from the continent
and yet educe[LC17] a sense of peace, of calm -
the screech of tyres and the nervous squeals[LC18]
of girls[LC19] , too young to quite appreciate
the peril they are in[LC20] , are heard, but these wheels
will not lose traction, skid and flip, no harm
befall these children. They will stay out late
forever[LC21] , pumped on youth and ecstasy,
on alloy, bass and arrogance, and speed
the back lanes, the urban gyratory,
the wide motorways, never having need
to race back home, for work next day, to bed[LC22] .
Each girl is buff, each geezer[LC23] toned and strong,
charged with pulsing juice [LC24] which, even yet,
fills every pair of Calvins and each thong,
never to be deflated[LC25] , given head
[LC26] in crude games of chlamydia roulette[LC27] .
Now see who comes to line the sparse grass verge[LC28] ,
to test them in Buckfast and Diamond White[LC29] :
rat-boys and corn-rowed cheerleaders who urge
them on to pull more burn-outs or to write
their donut Os, as signature, upon
the bleached tarmac of dead suburban streets.
There dogs set up a row and curtains twitch
as pensioners and parents telephone
the cops to plead for quiet, sue for peace [LC30] -
tranquility, though, is for the rich[LC31] .
And so, millenia hence, you garish crock[LC32] ,
when all context is lost, galleries razed
to level dust and we're long in the box,
will future poets look on you amazed,[LC33]
speculate how children might have lived when
you were fired,[LC34] lives so free and bountiful
and there, beneath a sun a little colder[LC35] ,
declare How happy were those creatures then,
who knew the truth was all negotiable
and beauty in the gift of the beholder[LC36] .
some Shirley Temple manqué [LC3] has knocked out[LC4]
delineating tales [LC5] of kids in cars
on crap estates[LC6] , the Burberry clad louts[LC7]
who flail[LC8] their motors through the smoky night
from Manchester to Motherwell or Slough[LC9] ,
creating bedlam on the Queen's highway[LC10] .[LC11]
Your gaudy evocation[LC12] can, somehow,
conjure the scene without inducing fright[LC13] ,
as would a Daily Express [LC14] exposé,
can bring to mind the throaty turbo roar[LC15]
of hatchbacks tuned almost to breaking point,
the joyful throb of UK garage or
of house [LC16] imported from the continent
and yet educe[LC17] a sense of peace, of calm -
the screech of tyres and the nervous squeals[LC18]
of girls[LC19] , too young to quite appreciate
the peril they are in[LC20] , are heard, but these wheels
will not lose traction, skid and flip, no harm
befall these children. They will stay out late
forever[LC21] , pumped on youth and ecstasy,
on alloy, bass and arrogance, and speed
the back lanes, the urban gyratory,
the wide motorways, never having need
to race back home, for work next day, to bed[LC22] .
Each girl is buff, each geezer[LC23] toned and strong,
charged with pulsing juice [LC24] which, even yet,
fills every pair of Calvins and each thong,
never to be deflated[LC25] , given head
[LC26] in crude games of chlamydia roulette[LC27] .
Now see who comes to line the sparse grass verge[LC28] ,
to test them in Buckfast and Diamond White[LC29] :
rat-boys and corn-rowed cheerleaders who urge
them on to pull more burn-outs or to write
their donut Os, as signature, upon
the bleached tarmac of dead suburban streets.
There dogs set up a row and curtains twitch
as pensioners and parents telephone
the cops to plead for quiet, sue for peace [LC30] -
tranquility, though, is for the rich[LC31] .
And so, millenia hence, you garish crock[LC32] ,
when all context is lost, galleries razed
to level dust and we're long in the box,
will future poets look on you amazed,[LC33]
speculate how children might have lived when
you were fired,[LC34] lives so free and bountiful
and there, beneath a sun a little colder[LC35] ,
declare How happy were those creatures then,
who knew the truth was all negotiable
and beauty in the gift of the beholder[LC36] .
[LC1]Note
the colloquial modern address to the urn which mirrors Keats’ direct address
“Thou.. ”
[LC2]Kitsch
= trendy, cheaply stylish
[LC3]Shirley
Temple was a famous child star of the 1930s.
Manque mean “wannabe”. Grayson Perry cross-dresses and often curls his
hair like Shirley Temple.
[LC4]Made
quickly and cheaply – in contrast to the artistry of the Greek urn
[LC5]Telling
stories – just as Keats’ vase has a “legend”
[LC6]Notice
the alliteration of kids, cars, crap
– this poem is deceptively written. It
uses a modern vernacular – but is actually highly crafted in its use of poetic
techniques. It is pretending to undercut the “classicism” of poetry like Keats’
but actually is showing how it is in the tradition of it.
[LC7]Burberry
is a high-end brand, very expensive, which is frequently ripped off and sold in
markets as the real thing. Hence
affordable by the “louts” – young men who have nothing better to do than drive
around in their “motors” – a word for “cars” which is usually used by working
class men.
[LC8]Work
hard – literally “beat with a flail” – an instrument for threshing corn
[LC9]Places
of social deprivation
[LC10]Images
of modern, urban living – in contrast to the “pastoral” setting of Keats.
[LC11]Metonomy
for “roads”
[LC12]Literally
“calling forth” – a Latinate word at odds with the colloquialism used earlier
[LC13]Like
the decoration on Keats’ vase, these are pictures, not real and therefore
silent and harmless
[LC14]A
tabloid newspaper which prints sensational stories
[LC15]This
stanza focuses on sounds of cars and music on the radio where Keats focuses on pipes and music. Note the eye-rhyme here – throaty, roar.
[LC16]Modern
music
[LC17]Draw
out. This is a Latinate word – again
showing the poet’s debt to earlier poetic forms.
[LC18]Note
the assonance
[LC19]Moves
on to the idea of the lovers
[LC20]Use
of enjambment and caesura – emphasis on peril
then the explanation of safety – these are but pictures, not real and so
no harm will come to them. Cv. Keats’
“She cannot fade”
[LC21]This
stanza focuses on drugs and sex. Cv.
Keats’ “for ever panting…”
Enjambment again, propelling the verse forward
[LC22]This
is an echoing of the chasing of the girls in Keats’ poem.
[LC23]Slang
for man. The poet is using the words of
his subjects.
[LC24]Sexual
reference
[LC25]A
pun – and also showing that they are fixed in one moment in time, as are the
revellers in Keats’ poem
[LC26]Pun
on fellatio and being “given your head” – allowed to run free
[LC27]They
take their chance with contracting a STD
[LC28]They
are showing off their driving skills in front of an audience of young
people. It is a kind of “ritual” like
the sacrifice in Keats’ poem.
[LC29]Local
beers
[LC30]The
onlookers who are not part of this “party”.
[LC31]These
kinds of happenings only occur in poor neighbourhoods
[LC32]Addresses
the urn, as does Keats, but harshly and unflattering. Cv. “Fair attitude”
[LC33]Like
Keats, he is speculating on the “message” that the pot will leave when the
present generation has gone.
[LC34]Pots
are made from clay which is heated in a kiln – “fired”
[LC35]Suggesting
many thousands of years in the future (the sun is cooling).
[LC36]A
modern take on Keats’ “Beauty is Truth”. For Keats, beauty is an absolute –
just as the Grecian Urn is an absolute – but for the modern world, perhaps,
definitions are less fixed. Truth is
open to interpretation and you are only beautiful if someone says you are –
possibly a comment on media representation.
But it is also a comment on his own poem – having taken an iconic poem
and made a pastiche – a “fake” copy.
Linked poems:
ReplyDeleteEffects of Time: Nine Year Old Self, Map-Woman
Beauty: Temple of Learning, Eat Me,
Ode
ReplyDeleteA formal, often ceremonious lyric poem that addresses and often celebrates a person, place, thing, or idea. Its stanza forms vary. The Greek or Pindaric (Pindar, ca. 552–442 B.C.E.) ode was a public poem, usually set to music, that celebrated athletic victories. (See Stephen Burt’s article “And the Winner Is . . . Pindar!”)
English odes written in the Pindaric tradition include Thomas Gray’s “The Progress of Poesy: A Pindaric Ode” and William Wordsworth’s “Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Reflections of Early Childhood.” Horatian odes, after the Latin poet Horace (65–8 B.C.E.), were written in quatrains in a more philosophical, contemplative manner; see Andrew Marvell’s “Horatian Ode upon Cromwell’s Return from Ireland.” The Sapphic ode consists of quatrains, three 11-syllable lines, and a final five-syllable line, unrhyming but with a strict meter. See Algernon Charles Swinburne’s “Sapphics.”
The odes of the English Romantic poets vary in stanza form. They often address an intense emotion at the onset of a personal crisis (see Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s “Dejection: An Ode,”) or celebrate an object or image that leads to revelation (see John Keats’s “Ode on a Grecian Urn,” “Ode to a Nightingale,” and “To Autumn”). Browse more odes.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/learning/glossary-term/ode
Questions on Tim Turnbull’s “Ode to a Grayson Perry Urn”.
ReplyDelete1. The young people described in the poem arouse very different sentiments in different people. Identify all the attitudes towards them in the poem. Can you find examples of specific words or phrases that convey these attitudes?
2. Look more closely at the narrator’s attitude towards the young people he describes. Does it change during the course of the poem?
3. The poem’s subject matter and verse form are based on John Keat’s “Ode on a Grecian Urn”. What are the effects of using this form to treat this subject matter (i.e. Grayson Perry)?
4. Do you think you need a good knowledge of the Keat’s poem (and the work of Grayson Perry) to appreciate Turnbull’s poem? If so, do you think this undermines the argument of Turnbull’s poem?
5. What do you understand by the idea that beauty is “in the gift of the beholder”? Do you think the young people described in the poem are “beautiful” and why?
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